Oh man, I am utterly in love with your characterization. And this story! As soon as I saw that a new chapter was posted, I just glee-d so hard. <3 <3 <3 <3

(Haha, Spock Prime had better watch out for Kirk on the warpath!)

Omg. OMG, I was just logging out, but I had to comment, because YOUR ICON RULES THE WORLD. (Oh, and thank you for the review! =D)

I like this chapter. Bones bugs me a little in the movie, but I like him here.

Wow, I knew Kirk was a slut, but geez that was an awful long list of men in his little black book.

Sorry this review so sparatic. I am sleepy and can't really focus now.

He's definitely an equal opportunity slut! Glad Bones is working for you, thanks for your review!

Oh baby, the awesome story continues! I don't mind the plot development. It's very necessary, you know? And very interesting, to boot. I'll be sticking around for the rest of this story, definitely. :D

Glad to hear it! I couldn't think of any way to further the plot without just taking the time to do it, so here it is lol.

*FANGIRL MOMENT*
Allright, I stop. But really, it's great! can't wait for the next chapter.

(Is it just me or is Jim a little slow to realise what's happening?)

He is a little slow to pick it up - I've noticed that the tendency recently seems to be to have him jump right to correct conclusion, but I'm coming at it from a different side. Kinda like, a human who has no understanding of telepathic contact might take a day or two to realize that what he's experiencing is telepathic vertigo.

Still, he IS slow about it! I blame it on his tendency to ignore his own hurts in favor of his ship!

Oh, this was very good chapter.

Thanks! I like the next one more, so hopefully you do too!

And now I'm almost late for classes. This was fun, the plot thickens fantastically. And Bones, I love Bones, and you have him down pat.

I had to dedicate an entire chapter to the plot - ah! But it all gets verrrrrry interesting from here, so maybe next time I really DO make you late for classes! Mwahahahaha

I await more fantastic installments.

Just put one up! Hope you like!

*Very* happy to see a new chapter of this. And plot advancement is good - I happen to be very fond of plot *grins*.

I loved the interaction between Jim and McCoy: "...“Damn it Bones! If you stick me with that thing one more time I’m going to pick up this biomonitor and hit you with it! If you don’t have some idea of what’s wrong with me by now then obviously there can’t be anything wrong with me!” Perfect Kirk reasoning ;)

Can't wait for the next bit!

I love plot too! It just tends to be less - intense than some of the other parts! And yesss, I thought that was perfectly in keeping with the Kirk/McCoy dynamic lol.

I liked the chapter quite a bit! I feel like we're getting the measure of this version of Kirk, slightly more mature than he was at the beginning of the movie, beginning to grow into that pride in being Captain, and not wanting to risk that position with this new development. I look forward to the next bit!

You hit the nail right on the head there, something you will see more explicitly in chapter three, which is now up! Hope it lives up to your expectations!

*squee*! 8DDDD
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This is amazing so far. c;
McCoy, so in character, actually, all of them.

TBH, I can't wait for the next chapter. ♥

Thank you! Hope you continue to like it!

LOL Jim is a skankity slut slut!! XD I love your characterization, they're perfect and totlly IC. Can't wait for the next chapter and the stranglin'! :D:D:D:D

Many thanks! =D I hope they continue to stay IC!

Bones here is pretty fantastic XD
And Kirk is love, of course :)

Isn't he thought? Man I love that doctor. Can he, like, be my doctor??

YAY! I was so excited for the new chapter and you totally rocked it!!!

I can't wait for more, great job :)

I am in seriously in love with this.

I am seriously grateful for that. :) Thanks!

OOooooooo. >__<

This is turning into something so EPIC WIN!!! That I'm having trouble.....doing everything. :I


It is kind of epically long, so I hope the win continues!

the best fic i ever read!!!!!! i love this sooooooooo much

thank you for sharing and live long and prosper ( can't wait for the next chapter )

Thank you for commenting! Peace and long life!

I'm loving this story so much :) Your characterizations are wonderful - can't wait for the next chapter!

That was great! And now that the mystery is solved, it's gonna be fun times! ^^

Oh, it only gets more interesting from here. VERY interesting, actually. Next chapter brings some huge changes.

This is really interesting. Like, interesting in the I-can't-wait-to-see-what-happens, on-the-edge-of-my-seat sort of way. I really want to see what, exactly, is wrong with Jim and how Spock (well, both of them) is going to react.

Well funny you should mention all that... go read chapter three! Certain answers await you there. ;)

Still really, really loving this!



One thing, though: instead of "exasperating the problem", I think you meant "exacerbating the problem".

I definitely did! Thank you! I've changed it!

This is really good! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

i've been waiting for a long story in this fandom and this one is just great. i loved the plot development, and your characterization is still great, for bones and jim. looking forward to reading more :)

I've been waiting too, and I've found a couple, but I felt the need to write one myself too! Hope you continue to like it!

Oh, man! O_O All those weird double-image/false memory moments were just brilliantly done! I'd be freaked out by that, too.

*applauds*

Yay, I'm glad that came across! I wanted to convey how really STRANGE it would be, and how utterly threatening. Like discovering you have a mental illness you didn't want to talk to anyone about and couldn't explain. Wouldn't that be like the height of inner panic?

This is tremendous. I'm so excited that chaptered reboot fics have started turning up, and this is certainly one of the best. Fantastic characterization.

And I have to say, you're my favorite author in the Batman fandom, and it's so great to see you involved in the wonder that is the rejuvenated Star Trek. :D

Wow, thank you! I will pop back over to Batman, I'm sure, when my obsession dies a little over here, but I doubt it will ever disappear. These guys are just so... arg! *flails*

Aggh! More, please! (Now?) I'm loving this. The writing flows so nicely and I'm quite caught up. While I'm glad I got to wrap up my reading for the night (sheesh, it's late), I also miss that there isn't another chapter.

Eagerly awaiting the rest!

There's a bit more to read now! And I will add a chapter every couple days. The story is technically finished, it's all in the editing now. Cheers!

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